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By Eugene Robinson, Washington Post columnist

This is a close call. I'll get to my leanings in a minute, but first a little critiquing is in order.

If there were justice in the world, Kevin would get points for degree of difficulty. Writing a whole column with tongue planted so firmly in cheek is exponentially harder than it looks. If your name is Gene Weingarten or Jonathan Swift, then go ahead, you can pull it off. If not, it's best to try some other approach. Any other approach.

Given that he sets such a high bar for himself, Kevin does pretty well. He picks a newsy subject, covers a lot of ground, manages to work in plenty of facts and figures. But he throws in so much that he weakens the point he's trying to make, which is...  which is what, exactly? That conservatives are being hypocritical and forgetting their espoused values? That's a fair observation, but if I were arguing with Kevin I'd point out that reaction to the new guidelines seemed to cross party lines. Were liberals who didn't like the proposed change being inconsistent with their purported values as well? Or is the point that it was only conservatives who wanted to demagogue the issue?

The bit about football season doesn't work at all. Seems just random. And I assume the kicker - "You betcha" - is a Palin reference, but I had to figure that out. There's just an awful lot going on here, and in the end there's not as much impact as I'd have hoped.

Zeba lays out a simpler task for herself: telling a story. She takes her sweet time about it, IMHO - the long first paragraph covers a lot of ground before I understand that this is going to be a column about health care. There was a time when columnists could expect their readers to stick with them through long, discursive, anecdotal lead paragraphs. That time is long gone.

But I do appreciate the simplicity and directness of Zeba's way with words. You don't get the feeling that she's dancing as fast as she can, and that's a good thing. I doubt, though, that President Obama has "frequently" uttered the paragraph-long quote she attributes to him. He might have frequently made that point, but I'll bet he varied a word or two.

Zeba makes only one point in her column - and I know what point she's making, even if it's a bit vague. (I could have used another quote from the head of the freelancers' union explaining exactly how the group is prejudiced by the health-reform legislation.) It's not the most incendiary column, but it does seem actionable: Our officials should take this growing segment of the workforce into account.

So... I'm giving the nod to Zeba. As I said, it was close. But I find her piece more persuasive, and her voice sounds fresh to my jaded ear.

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Eugene Robinson

 |  November 23, 2009; 12:01 AM ET
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goodgovernment: Thanks....it was so supposed to be snooty....you know, satire...
seriously, I love eugene robinson...just giving him a hard time...

Posted by: martymar123 | November 24, 2009 10:20 AM
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Oh, and I forgot to add, MartyMar123 that comment about the rest of the unwashed being unfamiliar with the works of Weingarten and Jonathan Swift was a little snooty.

Posted by: goodgovernment | November 24, 2009 9:57 AM
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I have learned a lot from following this competition and in reading the comments of others. Thanks for the experience.

As one who often marches alone, I am smiling because I agree with Eugene completely. Either I have learned something, or my brain cells are still capable of being creative.

Although I did not engage in back-and-forth with some of the other commenters, I did observe. I think I'll miss you.

And, I look forward to reading what Kevin brings to us.

Posted by: goodgovernment | November 24, 2009 9:54 AM
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Hey, MFKPF, MSJS, and others....I plan to stick around and read Kevin's 13 columns.
I hope you will, too, because if you choose to boycott them, well, I am part of that union, too.....

Now that the contest is (officially) "over"(but see my comment following the Achenbach critique)....I'm assuming it is OK to turn up the heat on Kevin. And since he is now a "real" pundit, well "snarky" reader comments go with that territory--and no soft-pedaling out of sympathy.....I'm happy about the fact that I voted for the competition in the final rounds...I feel no compunction now to spare (oh, poor) Kevin...

Posted by: martymar123 | November 24, 2009 9:42 AM
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Art Buchwald.

Posted by: douglaslbarber | November 24, 2009 1:16 AM
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Eugene Robinson...WaPo finally brings on the heavy hitters. As I've written before, being way out here in the Northwest Territories I get WaPo online and I had never heard of a number of the judges...Probably more a problem with my ignorance than the talent of the people involved, but Gene, I know of you...WaPo, MSNBC, etc. You're a nice guy with the politeness of your South Carolina roots and your critique shows that. I was a little rougher but those comments were directed at the writers on their respective pages...Kevin wasn't funny this time and Zeta missed an opportunity. Tell us what the problem is with the Freelancers plan and the Obama reform.
I wanna comment on something else. I participated throughout this contest. Yes, I didn't make the top ten but I accepted the invitation to read the work and comment. Marty, Chuckie, MSJS, even Wiggan's Limbaughesque rants, and others...it became a shrinking community of commenters and contestants and I've thoroughly enjoyed this little community. Today, however, there were many new and returning commenters. What exactly does "snarky" mean? I think I can speak for the regulars...we didn't intend whatever that means. I honestly found myself rooting for Kevin, Zeta, Courtney, Jeremy, and others. I hope you would take our critiques in stride. Thanx to everybody, I'll miss ya. Keep writing!

Posted by: mfkpadrefan | November 23, 2009 3:51 PM
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I've already critiqued Ms. Khan's and Mr. Huffman's work elsewhere, so I'll comment on Mr. Robinson's assessment here.

I was immediately struck by the earnestness and sincerity of his evaluation. And being the snarky cynic that I am, I didn't believe a word of it. The strong points of each column were waaaay too praised and the weak ones almost sounded like strengths.

And I'm left wondering what Mr. Robinson is really thinking. My guess is the marketing wizards who dreamt this contest up left those words on the cutting room floor.

Or maybe I'm just a snarky cynic.

Regardless, I wish the WaPo editors all the best in dealing with the winner's work.

Posted by: MsJS | November 23, 2009 12:49 PM
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"Writing a whole column with tongue planted so firmly in cheek is exponentially harder than it looks. If your name is Gene Weingarten or Jonathan Swift, then go ahead, you can pull it off. If not, it's best to try some other approach. Any other approach."

Gene Weingarten or Jonathan Swift...Oh, dear. If you know something about the history and scope of English literature, fine to refer to the Great Ones. Otherwise, better leave the implied gold standard stuff to those who have studied it, and do know.....

Otherwise, well-written analysis, except for last line which led me to speculate
that Robinson's eyes are perhaps better than his ears.....but who could blame him?


Posted by: martymar123 | November 23, 2009 12:14 PM
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Is there not justice in the world? Why should not degree of difficulty count for something?

Huffman did include a number of links to back up his argument. I'm not a fan of his style, but this column had substance -- and since Republicans in Congress are almost unanimous in opposing health care reform, directing comment at them for using rhetoric about cutting costs and opposing measures to do that very thing was appropriate.

Khan did set a simpler task for herself, one that she could have managed in about two paragraphs: health care reform should be fair to contractors, and I would know because I'm one myself (OK, maybe less than two paragraphs). She weakened her argument by passing along an assertion, without documentation of any kind, by one individual and endorsing it without an explanation. I actually dislike her writing style less than I do Huffman's, but he put more work into his column here and produced a piece that told me more than Khan's did.

Posted by: jbritt3 | November 23, 2009 12:43 AM
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